SynthTee Posted January 10 Share Posted January 10 (edited) A lot of changes are happening thanks to Lore Team, and we need players to get reading. Lore is going through a delicate stage, and it has a lot of room to grow. This is where you come in, we want you to read a page or more, and talk about what you think! Lore Team want to hear it, and are open to discussions. If you have anything to say, or what could need improving, reply on this topic or in #lore-chat on the Discord! It's fine if you haven't read lore till now, just general opinions of the writing is good. Core pages to be read: Nanotrasen The Syndicate (WIP) Trans-Solar Federation (WIP) Primer (WIP) Filler pages (optional but cool): Athland Mining Company (WIP) Sol System (WIP) Corporate Factions (WIP) Be aware this is not finalized and the lore may change at any point. Species Lore isn't here yet, come back later. Read 2023 November's Lore Update HERE Lore Portal HERE (By the way, I will be making a wiki update post soon, it will be a December & January update) Edited January 10 by SynthTee 3 1 1 1 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBadPerson Posted January 10 Share Posted January 10 Do not worry, I will save the lore team. 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfection Posted January 11 Share Posted January 11 A minor thing, but in the Nanotrasen page, referring to the characters by first-name only dispels the wikipedia-article style which is being aimed for. Rather than: Quote Admiring Johnathan's innovations, Michael suggested a merger, with Johnathan having a smaller authority share. Consider: Quote Admiring Nexus' innovations, Trasen suggested a merger, with Nexus having a smaller authority share. This will bring the style more in line with real-world articles on successfully businessmen. e.g. the wiki article on Bill Gates' and Paul Allen's relationship: Quote Gates was born and raised in Seattle, Washington. In 1975, he and Allen founded Microsoft in Albuquerque, New Mexico. Gates led the company as its chairman and chief executive officer until stepping down as CEO in January 2000, succeeded by Steve Ballmer. The personalities are full-named in the first instance, and surnamed from then. Love the work, though. I'll keep editing this with more pedantic bullshit! Nerf 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eligios Posted January 11 Share Posted January 11 But reading lore is for NERDS *gasp 1 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octus Posted January 14 Share Posted January 14 On 1/11/2024 at 3:35 AM, Nerfection said: A minor thing, but in the Nanotrasen page, referring to the characters by first-name only dispels the wikipedia-article style which is being aimed for. Rather than: Consider: This will bring the style more in line with real-world articles on successfully businessmen. e.g. the wiki article on Bill Gates' and Paul Allen's relationship: The personalities are full-named in the first instance, and surnamed from then. Love the work, though. I'll keep editing this with more pedantic bullshit! Nerf Thanks, I've made those edits and I find it much better. Always appreciate good criticism. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bawrks Posted January 29 Share Posted January 29 I LOVE lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LowTierGod Posted January 29 Share Posted January 29 8 minutes ago, Bawrks said: I LOVE lore I HATE lore! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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